What do you think of this story snip it?

i actually think it's really good, and i definitely want to read more!! the emotion the character feels is really strong, and the fact that you include his every thought adds to the suspense and likeability of this snipet. aside from some punctuation and spelling issues, i reallyyyyyyy enjoyed this, and i'm not just saying that. i would like to ask though: did you plan on your main characters' names being danielle and dan/danny? if so, that's really cute (: if not... it's still really cute (: just be sure to include the coincidence in the story. but yeah, i really want to find out what happens/what they did... keep writing, please (: